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Dolphin and Magnus 2.0 M&L style with new and improved X-Nauts!
I made a custom M&L Dolphin, and I made all the poses. I want you to approve it, so I know what Improvements I need to make. I made the Dolphin first, I will be making more creatures from SMW, and I also plan on submitting it. (sheet update #6) [Image: dolphinml2zy7.png]The most updated will be on the latest page.
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06-08-2008 05:06 PM
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RE: Custom M&L Dolphin
woah! those are pretty good! my only suggestion is that you make the tail on the vertically facing ones darker.

other than that, good job!
06-08-2008 05:10 PM
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RE: Custom M&L Dolphin
Hm, the lineart is excellent, however, I don't think the shading fits the style. I wouldn't consider these enemies if it weren't for the fact that Yoshi was able to eat them in SMW XD But if you fix the shading, it should look nice. I think there's an M&L tutorial on the site. But as said, the lineart is nice, also, I like your color choice.
06-08-2008 05:15 PM
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RE: Custom M&L Dolphin
toastersaurus Wrote:woah! those are pretty good! my only suggestion is that you make the tail on the vertically facing ones darker.

other than that, good job!
Ok, I made the tails on the vertical jumping motion darker.
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RE: Custom M&L Dolphin
Like Colton said... You need to arrange the shading, but the others things on the sprite are correct. Just arrange the shading and that will be perfect.
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06-08-2008 06:21 PM
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RE: Custom M&L Dolphin
don't their tail fins go the other way? It looks like a sharks tail fin.
06-08-2008 07:31 PM
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RE: Custom M&L Dolphin
FinalYoshi Wrote:Like Colton said... You need to arrange the shading, but the others things on the sprite are correct. Just arrange the shading and that will be perfect.
Ok, I arranged the shading to fit the style.
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06-08-2008 08:13 PM
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RE: Custom M&L Dolphin
pretty good... better than my blogg for metroid prime 2, I just cant get the swimming part right...
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RE: Custom M&L Dolphin
It doesn't look AA'd right, and needs more contrast. The shading is also a bit wierd...
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06-09-2008 02:06 AM
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RE: Custom M&L Dolphin
Elebit Wrote:It doesn't look AA'd right, and needs more contrast. The shading is also a bit wierd...
[Image: profpy4.png] Maybe you see something I don't.
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RE: Custom M&L Dolphin
Pretty good. It looks like it has a shark's tail though.
06-09-2008 03:16 AM
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Plasma Trooper Wrote:Pretty good. It looks like it has a shark's tail though.
I thought that the lineart would look better.Cool
Anyway, which enemy/ally from SMW should I do next in M&L style that is not already on TSR?
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RE: Custom M&L Dolphin
I have noticed that you use three shades. everything but human skin in ML style has 2. still, good job.
06-09-2008 03:35 AM
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RE: Custom M&L Dolphin
CoolYoshi Wrote:Anyway, which enemy/ally from SMW should I do next in M&L style that is not already on TSR?

How about... Cheep Cheeps? I haven't seen any on TSR yet.
06-09-2008 04:05 AM
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CoolYoshi Wrote:Maybe you see something I don't.

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06-09-2008 04:44 AM
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