pretzel

[mr grumbleguts]

i was eating a pretzel (the salty biscuit ones)
c+c

[Mabelma]

It's shape is nice and the details are nice the lineart is quite good but you need more contrast on the shading cause I can't see the shading.
That's all I have to say for now.

[mr grumbleguts]

as in you can't see the dark brown bits around some edges
or you can't see the highlights

[Mabelma]

I can't see the highlights they blend to much with the other color.
You should make an animation of someone eating it.
That would be nice.
LOL

[mr grumbleguts]

i don't intend to do anything with it.
just wanted some practice
here's some other stuff i did recently:

fruit...

based on some doodles i did at school...

[nairenu]

Mabelma, what are you talking about???

they don't blend, and there is shading =.='


Pretsel looks Kickass =3
and Nice monsters

[mr grumbleguts]

thanks

[Mabelma]

The new stuff looks nice but the first dude's head looks like a strawberry.
You should fix the highlight of the pretsel cause it's not so light.
Do you sprite food for practice?

Nairenu the shading is good but the highlights are not light enough.

[mr grumbleguts]

spriting food ~ still life art

i'll show you the drawing for "strawberry face" if you think its not nice
Edit: I can't because it's in my school locker...

[Mabelma]

About Strawberry face:
He looks nice but he looks like a strawberry
Call him strawberry face it sounds cool.
You don't have to show me if you don't want to it's ok.
Can you fix the highlights of the pretzel?

[mr grumbleguts]

Here is the inspiration for the robot man

[Mabelma]

Nice but the robot man sprite doesn't look so much like any of those two.

[mr grumbleguts]

does he need to???

[Mabelma]

Yeah if it's a sprited version of the drawing but if just an inspiration to do some other thing then no.

[Chaoxys]

Mabelma, would you please just stop. You keep pointing out things that either aren't true, or that don't matter at all. Until you learn to C+C properly, please just stop.