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Toad Offline
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Cool Bossy Order Pig
This is a pig sprite that I drew that could be a boss in my new game. Or it could just be a picture of a squealing pig that is rearing up on its hind legs. I'm no good at shines so help me with that. The grass is crappy so: Please give lots of C + C! Ninja

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01-01-2009 02:06 AM
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Devicho Offline
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RE: Bossy Order Pig
Anatomy is looking pretty off. Try fixing it up, and make the lines smoother. Shading on the left also looks kinda pillowy, I'd clean it up if I were you.

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01-01-2009 02:16 AM
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Gorsalami Offline
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RE: Bossy Order Pig
Looks like a horse. A pink horse.

Do what Devicho said, and try making the back legs smaller.

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01-01-2009 01:28 PM
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RE: Bossy Order Pig
My opinion is that you should first finish a sprite before going to another one.
So what I'm trying to say is finish the custom mario so you can learn from that experience and implemented what you learn to other sprites in your future.
(This post was last modified: 01-02-2009 12:02 AM by Renteura.)
01-02-2009 12:02 AM
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