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RE: Yoshi Portrait
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RE: Yoshi Portrait & The Tengu
Merged to keep S&PA clutter-free

Please keep your stuff in one topic next time

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RE: Sasuke, Yoshi, & The Tengu
to keep things a bit more organized, i also merged the sasuke & yoshi topic into this one

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RE: KYoujin's works
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07-14-2012 05:13 AM
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RE: KYoujin's works
You either love really desaturated colors or your monitor has bad settings, huh? ;-)
I think the skin tones could go with more contrast and some hue shifting. The red markings melt with the skin due to the low saturation. His belly looks quite flat.
Some of the lines are rather jaggy and you have banding in several spots. When applying anti-aliasing, place single pixels carefully and don't follow the line with a second.
The tongue and nose should drop shadows on the face and the teeth should have a little gap to make room for the tongue.

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I only illustrated some of my thoughts here, it's not polished. Focused on the big one mostly.

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RE: KYoujin's works
That .GIF makes it look like he's chewing his tongue, heh.

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RE: KYoujin's works
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is this better?
07-14-2012 08:01 PM
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RE: KYoujin's works
Is that saliva? It looks a lot like he's just foaming. Remember that saliva is generally relatively clear, and not 100% opaque white.
Well, at least when we're talking about drool.

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RE: KYoujin's works
(07-14-2012 10:31 PM)Speed-X Wrote:  Is that saliva? It looks a lot like he's just foaming. Remember that saliva is generally relatively clear, and not 100% opaque white.
Well, at least when we're talking about drool.
alright i'll make sure to fix that
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07-15-2012 11:26 PM
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