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RE: Shadow Queen PA
Her left hand (our right) looks a bit funky. Try and keep the widths consistent. Wink

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RE: Shadow Queen PA
It looks like that because it's the Shadow Queen, she is going to have odd proportions. Tongue

06-28-2012 12:16 AM
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RE: Shadow Queen PA
The only criticism I have is that I don't think the dithering works on the hand that's closest to us. I love the way you implemented it around her face -- it gives a nice, dark feeling that the character demands. But you've purposefully made the hand to look sort of flat on the top and I don't think the dither suits the effect you're going for.

Also when I first look at the piece, the dithering on the hand is what first catches my attention, which shouldn't be.

Beautiful, excellent work, though!
06-28-2012 12:23 AM
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RE: Shadow Queen PA
looks like too much dithering
06-28-2012 12:43 AM
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RE: Shadow Queen PA
I enjoy the dithering. It gives it a rather retro vibe, and it works with how it's on the near-transparent part of her body. I also love the perspective. Her fingers look very uneven in width on her left (our right) hand, however.
06-29-2012 11:13 PM
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