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Haven't sprited in almost a year and wanted to try starting up again. Anyways, this is Flynn from Tron. Wanted to get some criticism on the line art and such before continuing on with it, as well as help with the shading, as the lighted parts of his suit are throwing me off.

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12-11-2010 02:08 AM
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His arms look more like noodles then arms, like they don't just bend at the elbow.
12-11-2010 03:27 AM
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too much details, too low on contrast.

i'd work more on giving flynn and skeleton and actually work on his shoulders - the arms doesn't look conected at all to the rest of the body

as for the lineart, and specially the details, i'd go for something simpler, and then aadd some subtle details rather than try to stuff as much stuff as posible. try to play around with its shadows and how they would make the lights stand out more.
12-11-2010 03:43 AM
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