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Skidd Offline
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Luma - M&L:PiT
This is a quite old sprite of mine, but I decided to post it anyways.
[Image: Luma___Mario_and_Luigi_2_by_LeonardoDabooski.gif]
Comments and Constructive criticism please.
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05-22-2008 07:41 PM
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RE: Luma - M&L:PiT
Wow, it looks pretty good, except for the eye around the Red Luma.. seems kind of weird. Otherwise good job, make a Hungry Luma or something. Big Grin
05-22-2008 07:51 PM
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RE: Luma - M&L:PiT
Boo Wrote:Wow, it looks pretty good, except for the eye around the Red Luma.. seems kind of weird. Otherwise good job, make a Hungry Luma or something. Big Grin
Yes I noticed the eyes in the red Luma too, and I might make Hungry Luma later.
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05-22-2008 07:52 PM
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RE: Luma - M&L:PiT
Pretty cool. Are you going to work on it more?
05-22-2008 07:58 PM
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RE: Luma - M&L:PiT
Ragnarök Wrote:Pretty cool. Are you going to work on it more?
If people find something for me to add or fix in it.
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05-22-2008 08:00 PM
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RE: Luma - M&L:PiT
Cute ^^

It's some stars of Super Mario Galaxie? No?
05-22-2008 08:06 PM
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RE: Luma - M&L:PiT
Skidd Wrote:
Ragnarök Wrote:Pretty cool. Are you going to work on it more?
If people find something for me to add or fix in it.
Maybe an idle animation?
05-22-2008 08:09 PM
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RE: Luma - M&L:PiT
Cute. I agree with Ragnarok.
An Idle would seem fine.
05-22-2008 10:19 PM
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RE: Luma - M&L:PiT
Slightly more contrast and more shades could make it look better.

And the red Luma isn't as gawdsome as the the others.
05-23-2008 01:25 AM
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