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My first attempt at spriting. Please give constructive criticism so that I can improve my skills, but please don't be rude about it. Give credit if used, and enjoy!
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07-15-2012 05:35 PM
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RE: Deku Scrub
There's very low contrast between the shades of green. Amp up the contrast a bit. ...that's all I can really say.

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You may also want to change the background colour. Maybe try a pink or purple, since blue blends with green and it makes it hard to see the sprite properly.

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(07-15-2012 10:18 PM)Hoeloe Wrote:  You may also want to change the background colour. Maybe try a pink or purple, since blue blends with green and it makes it hard to see the sprite properly.

Thanks! I was wondering whether or not to use a different color background or not. I'll update this ASAP!
07-15-2012 11:04 PM
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For a sprite of this size, you're using too many shades. You could easily get rid of at least one shade of brown.

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