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[WIP] GR-2
Something I'm working on for a Super Robot Wars fangame, SRW Eternity.
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Any C+C you could possibly give me would be nice. I don't think that shoulder and arm are looking too good...

And just to note, the work isn't 100% my own. Basically one person makes a 3D model, another guy traces that (those rough grey bits you see there), and I refine those and fill in the details.

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05-22-2012 09:56 PM
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RE: [WIP] GR-2
Add more contrast to help the metallic effect. Especially make the highlights brighter. And addambient lighting. Make it shiny :-D

Reminds me of Cutman :-P

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05-23-2012 06:06 AM
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RE: [WIP] GR-2
Boy I sure do love being lazy as hell.
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Also,
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If anyone wants to point out anything horrible, that'd be nice.

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06-05-2012 01:30 AM
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RE: [WIP] GR-2
Female Buzz Lightyear? Looks cute!

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06-05-2012 01:44 AM
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RE: [WIP] GR-2
You're not the first to say that. Maybe I should go for some different colors...

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06-05-2012 01:46 AM
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RE: [WIP] GR-2
Nothing horrible, no sir.


Although there's quite a few jagged lines on the robot, its better to smooth them out properly before you shade it.

And for the girl, the left leg seems a bit bent odd, and the eyes are soul-piercing.
Try giving her some eyelids.

(06-05-2012 01:44 AM)Sengi~ Wrote:  Female Buzz Lightyear? Looks cute!

I didn't even notice that Surprise

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06-05-2012 01:51 AM
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RE: [WIP] GR-2
Could be her color pattern. (both characters have their colors patterned layout identically) and the fact both are fliers and might share a similar concept.

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RE: [WIP] GR-2
i thought he was going to be huge lol
06-05-2012 11:52 PM
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RE: [WIP] GR-2
It's a little weird that his arms don't have joints...

I'm having trouble seeing it do anything with them without looking silly

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06-05-2012 11:55 PM
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